Monday, July 27, 2009

Neat People vs. Sloppy People by Suzanne Brit


In her essay Britt delivered her purpose of distinguishing her opinion of the difference between sloppy and neat people. However, in my opinion, Britt a statement, assuming that all neat people are lazy and mean, they don’t care about process, they are bums and clods at heart, are especially vicious with mail, and etc. Others consider sloppy people to be the lazy ones. In general, this was a contrast to her explanation of neat people. Her essay contains 3 important aspects that are: definition, repetition, and comparison.

In her essay she shows a positive attitude towards the sloppy people, because in her description of "sloppy people" she describes positive facts and statements about them; as for example, she said: “Sloppy people carry in their mind’s eye a heavenly vision, a precise plan that is so stupendous, so perfect, it can’t be achieved in this world or the next”, but reality is that she tries to makes sloppy people sound nice and caring with what they have. That is basically her opinion about these kinds of people.

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